First sentence: Why this is the first line? This paragraph is the first line because it introduces the main idea of the text. It shows that the first draft is done, but more work is needed. This is a general statement that does not need other sentences for context. It does not start with a conjunction or use pronouns. Why other lines are not chosen? Paragraph 2 starts with 'The next step,' which needs context from a previous sentence. Paragraph 3 starts with 'Start this,' which also needs context. Paragraph 4 starts with 'In fact,' which shows it is not independent. Paragraph 5 starts with 'You can revise,' which uses a pronoun that refers back to the first draft.

Concluding sentence: Why this is the last line? This paragraph is the last line because it wraps up the ideas about revising. It shows that you can work on your paper in parts, which is a good way to finish.

Paragraph pairs:

• Pair 1 (Paragraph 1 → Paragraph 2): Paragraph 2 connects to Paragraph 1 because it shows what to do next after finishing the first draft. This is a logical order because it follows the idea of needing to improve the paper.
• Pair 2 (Paragraph 2 → Paragraph 3): Paragraph 3 connects to Paragraph 2 because it gives advice on when to start revising. This shows a clear order of steps to take.
• Pair 3 (Paragraph 3 → Paragraph 4): Paragraph 4 connects to Paragraph 3 because it explains that you can start revising even if the draft is not complete. This shows a logical flow of ideas.
• Pair 4 (Paragraph 4 → Paragraph 5): Paragraph 5 connects to Paragraph 4 because it gives more detail on how to revise. It shows that you can revise parts of the paper as you go along.