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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6127 Studying Abroad
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You will have 20 minutes to plan, write and revise an essay about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you develop a position, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 200-300 words.

It is often argued that studying overseas is overrated. There are many scholars who study locally. To what extent do you agree with this?

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It is often argued that studying overseas is overrated. There are many scholars who study locally. To what extent do you agree with this?
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It is sometimes argued that studying overseas is overrated because many capable scholars are trained locally. However, I largely disagree with this view, because studying abroad offers distinctive academic value that local university education struggles to replicate. On the whole, this debate deserves a clear opinion, since the argument about studying overseas shapes the career of many students.

In particular, the strongest advantage of studying overseas lies in the academic breadth that international education provides to every ambitious student. For instance, immersion in a foreign university encourages comparative thinking, independence, and advanced research skills that few scholars develop by studying locally. Moreover, a student trained in an overseas laboratory often learns alternative methods and a different culture, which raises scholarly quality after returning home.

Admittedly, critics argue that local education is sufficient and lower in cost, and this point has merit for many students who cannot afford studying abroad. Nevertheless, this affordability does not make overseas study overrated, because the benefit of international education is selective rather than universal. Furthermore, studying abroad builds intercultural communication, global networking, and personal growth, assets that local scholars rarely gain and that employers increasingly value.

In conclusion, although studying locally can produce excellent scholars, overseas university education provides unique academic depth, career opportunity, and global competence. Therefore, I disagree to a large extent that studying overseas is overrated, because its impact on every scholar and student extends well beyond credentials.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and supports it well. It disagrees that overseas study is overrated and shows why with the point about comparative thinking abroad. I largely disagree with this viewimmersion in a foreign university encourages comparative thinking, independence, and advanced research skills
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well linked with clear signpost words. These guide the reader through each point in order. In particularFor instanceMoreoverNeverthelessIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. These add reasons and relative ideas smoothly. because studying abroad offers distinctive academic value that local university education struggles to replicatewhich raises scholarly quality after returning home
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is controlled well. This concessive structure is accurate. although studying locally can produce excellent scholars
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. academic breadthglobal networkingintercultural communicationglobal competence
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. overseasaffordability
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 236 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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